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No. 40, April 1998

 
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Some thoughts on TOK assessment: thoughts on essays

by Hugh Mitchell
International Secondary School, Eindhoven, Netherlands

Observations about the TOK essay grading rubrics. (Note: this article refers to the assessment scheme that was in effect until 2000.)


Some years ago I worked with a teacher who eked out his salary by growing tomatoes on a commercial basis. He told me of his surprise on finding that the European Community defined a grade 1 tomato purely in terms of its size, colour and regularity of shape. The criteria made no reference to one all-important point--its FLAVOUR.

Perhaps we are in danger of making a similar mistake with TOK essays. We have criteria that refer to clarity, content and critical thought, but do not specifically mention creativity. The danger, clearly, is that teachers, more concerned with student grades than with fostering a critical approach to knowledge, will teach an essay writing formula that should produce high marks at the possible expense of creative thinking.

Getting high grades is no problem: take Reuben Abel's Man is the Measure as your starting point, throw in a few references to the canon of western philosophical thought (no matter if the student is based in India or Africa), add a dash of counterclaims (usually in the penultimate paragraph) and BINGO!--it's a certain B and a possible A, especially if the teacher spends two years rehearsing the relevant techniques.

But if this is what it's all about, then why doesn't the IB just offer Epistemology at Higher and Subsidiary level and let the rest of us forget all about it? What justification can there be for TOK's central position in the familiar hexagon, other than that it promotes a creative individual response to the learning process?

The provision of exemplar essays and hints that teachers should restrict themselves to setting past and present prescribed titles may be of some help in avoiding major derailments, but they raise several questions, namely:

1. What happens to the teacher's right to set her own titles? Surely this must be retained, in the interest of a creative approach to the subject.

2. What's wrong with students generating their own titles, provided that they have an appropriate "problems of knowledge" orientation?

3. Must linguistically-limited students (a fair percentage of IB candidates) be restricted to a prescribed list consisting almost exclusively of titles of puzzling linguistic complexity? (I note that the latest batch are even more complicated than previous ones.)

By all means let's have a measure of comparability between school and school. But I do hate to see the baby disappearing down the plug­hole along with the bathwater. And while I'm being metaphorical, shouldn't we be helping our students to produce fruit with flavour, rather than mere bland symmetry?

 

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